First impressions... we spend a lot of time watching these characters walking... I wonder if you could 'cut to the chase' and get them on the boat much sooner - I don't think you/we need all that walking, walking, walking - use editing to condense that bit of action - so we can be shown the boat, we can be shown the trio of characters, we can see their feet, we can cut to their faces, and then we can be at the jetty already - the great thing about film and editing is that you can often lose some of this interim stuff. What do you think?
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ReplyDeleteFirst impressions... we spend a lot of time watching these characters walking... I wonder if you could 'cut to the chase' and get them on the boat much sooner - I don't think you/we need all that walking, walking, walking - use editing to condense that bit of action - so we can be shown the boat, we can be shown the trio of characters, we can see their feet, we can cut to their faces, and then we can be at the jetty already - the great thing about film and editing is that you can often lose some of this interim stuff. What do you think?