Ok, I'll comment on this review, but the advice goes for your previous reviews too... As Dan said, make sure that you proofread before posting, to pick up any spelling errors. Also, you seem to be using just quotes by Hitchcock himself - it is ok to use the occasional one to let your reader know what Hitchcock himself thought of things, but ideally you need to use a greater variety of sources. This means reading other film critics' writings and selecting quotes from there to further your discussion. Make sure that you reference the quote directly after you have used it, with the author's surname and the date it was published, in brackets; for example 'blah blah blah,' (Hagan, 2012). The quotes need to be in italics too...
Hi Ridge,
ReplyDeleteOk, I'll comment on this review, but the advice goes for your previous reviews too...
As Dan said, make sure that you proofread before posting, to pick up any spelling errors. Also, you seem to be using just quotes by Hitchcock himself - it is ok to use the occasional one to let your reader know what Hitchcock himself thought of things, but ideally you need to use a greater variety of sources. This means reading other film critics' writings and selecting quotes from there to further your discussion. Make sure that you reference the quote directly after you have used it, with the author's surname and the date it was published, in brackets; for example 'blah blah blah,' (Hagan, 2012). The quotes need to be in italics too...